Creative writing (story) part 4

The kidnappers stared at him for about three seconds, which seemed to Blake as the longest three seconds in his life, and then one of them came to him, grabbed him by the back, tore his shirt off and stabbed him with the injection he was carrying in his pocket. Blake screamed and in seconds he was unable to move, shaking softly on the floor, completely paralized.
The kidnapper started screaming then loudly.
“Now we go to Elena, come on!”, he shouted, but in that same second, police cars could be heard in the distance, and another kidnapper said:
“No, there’s no time now, call the others!”, and the one who had Blake unconscious in his arms took out a phone and said: “We need you now, come on!”.
The kidnappers ran outside and suddenly, a black helicopter started approaching the school.

Elena heard the helicopter and screamed: “They’re taking Blake! NO!”, and this time not only she but nearly all the school ran outside to save their friend, but it was too late, Elena saw her unconscious brother being carried and thrown inside the aircraft, and she saw the helicopter fly away.
She could handle it no more and dropped to her knees crying and shaking. Half the school was hugging her trying to calm her down, and the others were watching silently the sinister helicopter.
“It´s gonna be alright El’”, whispered Nicolas, her boyfriend in her ear.
However, Elena knew she would never see her brother again.


Life in the jungle-chapter 2

The helicopter flew away quickly from the site of the crime. The sleeping boy was lying on the back seat while six men discussed what to do now. They had not followed orders correctly, the orders were to capture both Blake and Elena Nogales, but they only had time for Blake.
“Sooner or later we’ll have to tell him anyways!”, said one of the men.
“Then you call him!”, answered another one rudely.
“Fine, gimme the phone”, said the first man. He grabbed the phone from the other guy and dialed the number. A cold voice answered.
“What is it? Do you have the Nogales?” it speaked.
“Boss, we had no time to take the girl, but we do have the boy”, answered the kidnapper, his voice shaking.
“Consider yourself lucky, because I have a new plan for Elena Nogales, is the boy okay?” he said.
“Yes, he is still under the effects of the drug, he is still sleeping” said the kidnapper more calmly now that he had seen the boss’s pacific reaction to the bad news.
“Good, I want him here as soon as possible. Make sure he doesn’t wake up until he is here, and take whatever he has in his pockets from him”, said the cold voice, and then he hung up the phone.
The kidnapper put the phone away and turned to the other men:
“We’re not in trouble, he says it is good that we didn’t take Elena, he has other plans for the girl.”